This essay explains about technology.
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World’s technologies are developing rapidly. However many argues that it will reduce the traditional and ways of life. This essay will discuss that negative implications of extension.
In the past, many student were studying in a group consist of large numbers. These situations gave some advantages like socializing and teamwork. These days’ students are studying individually as there are significant numbers of technological tools such as personal computers and TV.
It leads to an anti social behavior like syndrome. Student would prefer to study or watch TV alone rather than involves in a group. However, there are also benefits with the technology development.
An individual can work productively and able to keep up with society
Before World Wide Web, libraries and books were the main source of information. Present days the Internet is proven the best tool in finding information. It is quick, time saving and relatively cheep. Originally, for finding information it develops into more usage like watching live TV, file sharing, online banking and internet shopping. Imagine if there are no more Internets today. The society’s life will move backward
In conclusion, Technology devices reduce face-to-face human interaction and also eroding human’s mental power and skill however today society can not think without technology.
Since human and also future society will receive advance of science from technology.
Therefore, societies have to prepare technology problem and find about the coexistence between advancement and preservation
In the past, many student were studying in a group consist of large numbers. These situations gave some advantages like socializing and teamwork. These days’ students are studying individually as there are significant numbers of technological tools such as personal computers and TV.
It leads to an anti social behavior like syndrome. Student would prefer to study or watch TV alone rather than involves in a group. However, there are also benefits with the technology development.
An individual can work productively and able to keep up with society
Before World Wide Web, libraries and books were the main source of information. Present days the Internet is proven the best tool in finding information. It is quick, time saving and relatively cheep. Originally, for finding information it develops into more usage like watching live TV, file sharing, online banking and internet shopping. Imagine if there are no more Internets today. The society’s life will move backward
In conclusion, Technology devices reduce face-to-face human interaction and also eroding human’s mental power and skill however today society can not think without technology.
Since human and also future society will receive advance of science from technology.
Therefore, societies have to prepare technology problem and find about the coexistence between advancement and preservation
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