'pet'에 해당되는 글 2건

  1. 2007/07/07 전에 작성한 애완동물에 관한 기초답안입니다.
  2. 2007/06/22 About pets

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English 2007/07/07 12:38
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sample answer
Dog and cats can be wonderful companions but there are also a number of problems associated with pet ownership, both for the animals and for the community.
In the best situations pets are fed, cared for and loved as part of a family, It is easy to see how much attention is given to pets, by the range of products available in the pet section of supermarkets. In return, cats and dogs contribute to the well being of the community in many ways. Dogs are useful for protection and serve ad guides for the disabled. People with pets are not only happier and healthier, but may even live longer. Thus the animals benefit individuals and the community as well.
There are, however, also negative aspects for the pets and for the community. The freedoms of both dogs and cats are increasingly restricted. In Australia there in community pressure to force owners to keep cats inside at night to protect native birds and animals. Dogs can no longer run free in parks and at the beach but must be kept on leads.
These restrictions have been imposed by the community to protect the public. In addition pet owners are required to clean up after their dogs.
Parks and beaches often provide plastic dogs for this purpose.
The community also has to pick up the costs of dogs and cats that have been abandoned by irresponsible owners.
So the relationship between pets and the community is a complex one.
More and more the community is intervening to force pet owners to restrict the activities and freedom of their pets. Still, responsible owners, prepared to give adequate time and attention to their cats and gods, can give them a good and happy life
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About pets

English 2007/06/22 16:06

나에게는 관련되지 않는 내용이기에 참 글쓰기 힘들었다.
애완동물이라 -_-;;; 내 삶에 키우게 될지도 모르겠지만... 지금 당장은 키울맘이 없다.
아래서도 말하지만 알아서 못하니 밥도 챙겨줘야 하고~ 돈도 들고....


Topic /
Many people keep dogs and cats as companions. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the community as a whole.

Nowadays many people have pets.
What makes them to decide about buying a pet? This essay will consider that loneliness in society caused such decision.

Modern society has much material richness but not much happiness compare to the old days.
In fact, developed countries own more pets then developing countries or poorer countries.
This can be seen from the number of doctors, social workers and health care experts for pet

Generally having a pet has many advantages and disadvantages. A dog is considered a man's best friend.
Nevertheless, it needs great care and feeding. This will increase personal expenses. Lonely person would emphasize that having a pet gives a feeling of satisfaction.
Therefore, some pet owners are spending or investing in many things for a pet.
However there is some who bought a spider a pet, this cannot be seen as loneliness factor nut rather just for interest.

In summary having a pet gives more benefits than inconveniences.
Although human relationship is more important than a pet relationship
If loneliness occur than there is a need for meeting new people and enjoying more things in life


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